Media assessment 1: learner response

 

1) Type up your feedback in full (you don't need to write the mark and grade if you want to keep this confidential).

1a) I got a grade 4 which is 11/30 

2) Read the mark scheme for this assessment carefully. Write down the mark you achieved for each question: 

Q1:         0/1

Q2 :        0/1

Q3:       4/12

Q4:        2/2 

Q5:       3/6

Q6:       2/8

3) Identify one of your stronger questions. Why did you do better on this question? Use the mark scheme to help you with this.

3a)     My stronger question was Q4 it was about analysing and i think I'm strong  in that and furthermore that was my highest mark in this assessment

4) Identify one of your weaker questions. Why did you score lower on this particular question? Use the mark scheme to help you with this.

4a)  my weaker questions is Q6 this is because i need to improve in stereotypes because I'm weak in those types of questions   

5) Finally, write a new, detailed paragraph for Question 3 - the unseen text 12 mark question. Use the mark scheme to identify anticipated content you can add to your response and make sure you refer to the text and write in detail. 

5a) The camera shot looks like its a medium close up (MCU)  and the camera shot shows how the persons face expressions and it shows the feeling of the poor boy that needs a toilet in his very small village the child looks depressed and very sad the title 'Dig toilets not graves' could highlight that they do not have any toilets in their small village and al the poor little boy is seeing is graves no toilets. You could see in the background the small shack which could suggests they can not afford for a bigger house.